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Düzenleyen: Arthur Shi —

Düzenleme onaylandı tarafından Arthur Shi

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-[* black] Crammed to the rim with components, cables and fancy tech we probably forgot to mention the copper heating pipe in the left side of the frame and the rubber padding at the bottom edge of the battery.
-[* black] This phone is short of any free space inside why we might accept the missing headphone jack.
+[* black] This phone is chocked full with modular components, cables and fancy tech. It is so short of any free space, that we might accept the missing headphone jack ... maybe.
+[* black] ''(chopped from first bullet, not sure how to keep this) ''We didn't even mention the copper cooling pipe in the left side of the frame, or the rubber padding at the bottom edge of the battery.
[* black] What we don’t accept is listed further down …