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Düzenleyen: Kristen Gismondi

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-[* black] Blossoming from its cocoon is the keyboard butterfly mechanism designed by Apple. Will this butterfly keyboard go [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5G5qtWG5oO8|twice as high|new_window=true] as the traditional scissor mechanism?
-[* black] We take a closer look at the Retina display described by Apple as [http://www.apple.com/macbook/?cid=wwa-us-kwg-mac-com|"the thinnest, most energy-efficient Retina display ever on a Mac."|new_window=true]
+[* black] Blossoming from its cocoon is the keyboard butterfly mechanism newly designed by Apple. Let's see if this keyboard will go [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eBRYsAfchkY|twice as high|new_window=true] as the traditional scissor mechanism.
+[* black] We take a closer look at the Retina display described by Apple as [http://www.apple.com/macbook/?cid=wwa-us-kwg-mac-com|"the thinnest, most energy-efficient Retina display ever on a Mac."|new_window=true] The pixels themselves have a larger aperture, enabling more light to come through.